Valkus
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Location : In your heart, and In your mind.
 | | Subject: Re: The Adventures of Maral Dimor Mon Nov 09, 2009 9:56 pm | |
| It's looking very good so far.  | |
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Tellen Silversun
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| | Subject: Re: The Adventures of Maral Dimor Mon Nov 16, 2009 12:29 pm | |
| Great work so far, Maral! | |
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Valkus
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Join date : 2009-09-14
Age : 34
Location : In your heart, and In your mind.
| | Subject: Re: The Adventures of Maral Dimor Wed Feb 03, 2010 2:26 am | |
| - Maral Dimor wrote:
- here is my intro to my new set of new characters this will connect to what i have right now
ATC 1
This is the last member of the 455th republic ground team. This is my story. Being in the army you start to blur the lines between friends and family. I’ve seen so many of them die in my arms that I truly lost the meaning of my last name. No one’s left from my family to carry on traditions that every family has. See people don’t realize that you’re never the same once you shoot somebody or get shot at. So I finally found time to write my log for Jack. I really don’t know why I have to write these. Great start bro. | |
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Scott Chain
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Join date : 2009-12-01
Age : 35
Location : outside Turry's window
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Scott Chain
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Posts : 7510
Join date : 2009-12-01
Age : 35
Location : outside Turry's window
| | Subject: Re: The Adventures of Maral Dimor Tue Mar 02, 2010 5:50 pm | |
| Heh... I find mistakes in my writing all the time. Speaking of which, I should get back to my own story some time. | |
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