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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   anakin solo <<Rejected>> EmptySun Jun 20, 2010 9:38 pm

anakin solo wrote:
i am sorry for any misspellings that might have occurred Shocked

No problem! Feel free to post around the thread and get a feel for the various personalitys the guild possesses.

Leadership will most likely respond soon and get back to you on the process of recruitment. Galenth Dysley by the way, guild archivist/historian at your service. What a Face
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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   anakin solo <<Rejected>> EmptySun Jun 20, 2010 9:51 pm

anakin solo wrote:
thanks! Smile could i have your opinion on if i did well i like to know how i did

You did fine in my mind; was about as indepth as my application when I applied for access into the Fillorean Society. However, i'm not leadership, therefore, my opinion holds little to no weight. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   anakin solo <<Rejected>> EmptySun Jun 20, 2010 9:56 pm

Aye there... Very Happy

Erm... is this impagent from TOR forums?
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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   anakin solo <<Rejected>> EmptySun Jun 20, 2010 10:13 pm

Oh... sorry for the assumption then. Very Happy Word of advice tho, one of our leaders is a grammar/spelling god. I'd go through and capatalize/punctuate a little. Other than that tho it looks fine. You don't need to worry a great deal about your bio till you put up a character description in the character creation thread.

I'm Scott Chain... resident Moderator/maker-o-things for the guild. The more you post the quicker leadership will be able to review your app. If you have any questions feel free to ask. Hope you enjoy it here. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   anakin solo <<Rejected>> EmptySun Jun 20, 2010 10:24 pm

Hey,
I'm Mon Pandamari.
Nice to meet you.
What the above posters said. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   anakin solo <<Rejected>> EmptySun Jun 20, 2010 10:42 pm

Scott Chain wrote:
Oh... sorry for the assumption then. Very Happy Word of advice tho, one of our leaders is a grammar/spelling god. I'd go through and capatalize/punctuate a little. Other than that tho it looks fine. You don't need to worry a great deal about your bio till you put up a character description in the character creation thread.

I'm Scott Chain... resident Moderator/maker-o-things for the guild. The more you post the quicker leadership will be able to review your app. If you have any questions feel free to ask. Hope you enjoy it here. Razz

Both of us are grammar/spelling gods.

Thanks for the application. As everyone so far has said, feel free to post around the forums available to you, so that we are able to review your application. The more you post, the faster the review process takes.

I'd also like to see you flesh out your bio a bit more so that Tellen and I have a better idea of your RP style, how you see your character(s), etc. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me or leave them here.
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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   anakin solo <<Rejected>> EmptySun Jun 20, 2010 10:47 pm

Sergei Meranov wrote:
Scott Chain wrote:
Oh... sorry for the assumption then. Very Happy Word of advice tho, one of our leaders is a grammar/spelling god. I'd go through and capatalize/punctuate a little. Other than that tho it looks fine. You don't need to worry a great deal about your bio till you put up a character description in the character creation thread.

I'm Scott Chain... resident Moderator/maker-o-things for the guild. The more you post the quicker leadership will be able to review your app. If you have any questions feel free to ask. Hope you enjoy it here. Razz

Both of us are grammar/spelling gods.

Wha... Shocked I knew it I've been tricked.

*flees thread*
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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   anakin solo <<Rejected>> EmptyMon Jun 21, 2010 3:29 am

Galenth Dysley wrote:
anakin solo wrote:
i am sorry for any misspellings that might have occurred Shocked

No problem! Feel free to post around the thread and get a feel for the various personalitys the guild possesses.

Leadership will most likely respond soon and get back to you on the process of recruitment. Galenth Dysley by the way, guild archivist/historian at your service. What a Face

confused

Welcome to the forums, Yohan. There's nothing more for me to say that hasn't been said already, so take note, it's good advice. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   anakin solo <<Rejected>> EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 2:54 am

anakin solo wrote:
just so you guys know my character bio is not complete.
I am right now just having trouble thinking of a follow up to finish it

Once you're finished, get back to us and we'll take a fresh look at your app. What a Face
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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   anakin solo <<Rejected>> EmptyTue Jun 22, 2010 10:13 pm

That's a good start. It's still a bit short, but that could be intentional, which is fine. I'd like you to go back through and clean up the grammar and spelling a bit, just to increase the readability. Also, if you feel like it, you can flesh out the bio even more. Look in our Open RP forums for a guide I posted that has some questions to ask that might help you flesh out your character.
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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   anakin solo <<Rejected>> EmptyThu Jun 24, 2010 5:11 pm

changing your name would be important... Anakin Solo is a cannon name... You can better think of something else bro.

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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   anakin solo <<Rejected>> EmptyThu Jun 24, 2010 9:45 pm

My apologies for doing this late, but I didn't want to make a social faux pas by overstepping my bounds. Either way, as the new guy around town, I would like to say Hello and welcome!
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PostSubject: Re: anakin solo <<Rejected>>   anakin solo <<Rejected>> EmptyTue Jun 29, 2010 11:25 pm

The leadership has decided to decline your application for the time being. Feel free to reapply at a later date if you'd like another shot.
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