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    Dark Space II: Forsaken World

    Post  Scott Chain on Thu Apr 15, 2010 6:49 am

    (OOC: Here is part two of Dark Space. I hope you guys will enjoy! Since we are starting from a previous RP under certain conditions this is only a semi open RP. PM me if you want to join. Those of you who were part of part 1 are obviously already part of this RP. Now RP and have fun!)
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    Um... let's see. If I recall correctly Vigo, Titan, Levlin, and I are on the shuttle and Victoria is in the escape pod.


    Dark Space II: Forsaken World


    Wind blows freely across the landscape. Snow whips across the frozen wasteland of ice covered mountains, cliffs, and valleys. The sky is lit by a cold blue star indicating the planet’s sun. Brilliant bolts of lightning graze the atmosphere of the world, never reaching the ground. Evidence of the horrific collision in space is nonexistence from the world. The wind whistles loudly as the emergency bulkhead of a shuttle groans open. Inside is a tangle of bodies and wire. Though the tangle of bodies are still very much alive.

    ***

    Elsewhere on the surface of this desolate world an escape pod implanted near the edge of a cliff cracks open. The inhabitants inside unsuspecting of where they had landed.

    ***

    Scott’s vision finally began to clear. The Force rushed through him giving him a feel of the situation before he could even fully think straight. Most everyone was there. However, to his left there was an absence in the life force of a trooper, and towards the front, the copilot. He shook his head.

    “Sound off.” Scott said roughly. The compartment that had filled with smoke was clearing. The emergency bulkhead had automatically opened. Cold air was spilling through the door.


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    Re: Dark Space II: Forsaken World

    Post  TitanT2 on Thu Apr 15, 2010 9:50 am

    Scott Chain wrote:(OOC: Here is part two of Dark Space. I hope you guys will enjoy! Since we are starting from a previous RP under certain conditions this is only a semi open RP. PM me if you want to join. Those of you who were part of part 1 are obviously already part of this RP. Now RP and have fun!)
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    Um... let's see. If I recall correctly Vigo, Titan, Levin, and I are on the shuttle and Victoria is in the escape pod.


    Dark Space II: Forsaken World


    Wind blows freely across the landscape. Snow whips across the frozen wasteland of ice covered mountains, cliffs, and valleys. The sky is lit by a cold blue star indicating the planet’s sun. Brilliant bolts of lightning graze the atmosphere of the world, never reaching the ground. Evidence of the horrific collision in space is nonexistence from the world. The wind whistles loudly as the emergency bulkhead of a shuttle groans open. Inside is a tangle of bodies and wire. Though the tangle of bodies are still very much alive.

    ***

    Elsewhere on the surface of this desolate world an escape pod implanted near the edge of a cliff cracks open. The inhabitants inside unsuspecting of where they had landed.

    ***

    Scott’s vision finally began to clear. The Force rushed through him giving him a feel of the situation before he could even fully think straight. Most everyone was there. However, to his left there was an absence in the life force of a trooper, and towards the front, the copilot. He shook his head.

    “Sound off.” Scott said roughly. The compartment that had filled with smoke was clearing. The emergency bulkhead had automatically opened. Cold air was spilling through the door.


    "Well that was quite a ride..." Titan said to Scott...
    Titan took out his gone to secure the perimiter.

    "Nothing on thermal optics or on my scanner... This place is dead..."

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    Re: Dark Space II: Forsaken World

    Post  Scott Chain on Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:19 am

    Scott climbed through the opening after Titan. He looked at his friend then back into the shuttle's hold. A couple of commandos crawled out after him and began a sweep of the exterior of the shuttle. As Scott surveyed the suroundings he took note of Titan's comment.

    This place is a tomb...

    For as far as the eye could see it was a winter landscape. In the distance there were mountains. He looked back at the shuttle again.

    "This thing aint gonna fly again sir." One of the commandos stated.

    "Titan, we need to see if we can at least bring up scans of the region. We need to see if Victoria landed here too. Looks like it's just the four of us for now. Levlin and Vigo are still out cold." In all there were only 8 of them left by the shuttle. Four commandos, and four of the Republics best. Who knew how many survived with Victoria.


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    ohh no were on a planet!

    Post  Victoria Alenko on Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:31 am

    The air locks released and the door opened to snow covered landscape. She turned to the men in the escape pod. Out of the four one was dead another unconscious with a small stream of blood coming from his brow. She approached the wounded and sent a wave of the force into him, pulling him back into consciousness.
    "Are you fit soldier?"

    The man nodded "yes ma'am"he stood and grabbed his rifle.

    She turned to the three men. "We need to find the others. I can only assume they crashed down here as well."

    "What are our orders?

    "Jenkins use your thermal to check for any life forms. We need to know whats out there. As for everyone else stay close were blind here. "

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    Re: Dark Space II: Forsaken World

    Post  Guest on Fri Apr 16, 2010 8:11 pm

    "Sound off."

    A voice? Couldn't be. I'm dead...Asleep, maybe...The voice can't be talking to me..Wait..Scott?? That's right...The ship!


    "Off.." Vigo groaned, as he slowly moved his aching limbs.


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    Re: Dark Space II: Forsaken World

    Post  Scott Chain on Sat Apr 17, 2010 1:37 am

    Scott looked back into the shuttle. Vigo was now regaining conciousness.

    "Vigo... you alright?" The man looked dazed. "We need to get scans up of the area. Preferably on those mountains in the distance. How much do you think you can fix that?"

    Scott pointed to the tangled mess that was the com panel at the front of the shuttle.


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    Re: Dark Space II: Forsaken World

    Post  Guest on Sat Apr 17, 2010 1:52 am

    "Never better. Really..." Vigo chuckled weakly. "Think I fractured a rib when I fell, though. I'll live."

    Vigo grunted and slowly lifted his head to see where Scott gestured. The comm panel looked like someone adhered a grenade to it.

    "It...Doesn't look too promising, mate.. I'll give it a shot, though.."

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    Re: Dark Space II: Forsaken World

    Post  Scott Chain on Sat Apr 17, 2010 4:04 am

    Before Scott could say anything else one of the commandos approached him.

    "Sir, we picked something on scans."

    "An escape pod?"

    "Unfortunately no, sir. We found something much larger. Some kind of structure. Might be a base." The commando paused as if he didn't want to say the rest. Scott took the que and asked further.

    "What did you pick up on extensive thermal scans?"

    "Well we're not really sure. There are masive thermal signatures all over the region."

    "Why didn't weren'r they picked up on our original scans."

    "The signatures... they're coming from underground." The soldier said with a confused expression.

    "Let me see." Scott reached for the datapad the trooper was holding. As he scanned the pad a low rumble shook the ground around the shuttle.

    "What was that?" One of the commandos on top of the shuttle questioned.


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    Re: Dark Space II: Forsaken World

    Post  TitanT2 on Sat Apr 17, 2010 6:51 am

    Scott Chain wrote:Before Scott could say anything else one of the commandos approached him.

    "Sir, we picked something on scans."

    "An escape pod?"

    "Unfortunately no, sir. We found something much larger. Some kind of structure. Might be a base." The commando paused as if he didn't want to say the rest. Scott took the que and asked further.

    "What did you pick up on extensive thermal scans?"

    "Well we're not really sure. There are masive thermal signatures all over the region."

    "Why didn't weren'r they picked up on our original scans."

    "The signatures... they're coming from underground." The soldier said with a confused expression.

    "Let me see." Scott reached for the datapad the trooper was holding. As he scanned the pad a low rumble shook the ground around the shuttle.

    "What was that?" One of the commandos on top of the shuttle questioned.


    "I have a bad feeling about this... Let's not stay here around to long."

    Titan thought... The ships had to be destroyed...

    "Trooper, scan for an old starbase or anything with a orbital cannon on this rock. Our first priority should be to destroy the ships... If this spreads to other vessels we are screwed."

    "Tureil, Scott, we need to find a way to transport our knocked out friend Levlin over there. An improvised brancard..."

    "I'll rig the shuttle with explosives because this thing ain't gonna fly again... We'll detonate it when we are far away. If there are creatures on this planet they will be drawn to the explosion not to us directly."

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    Re: Dark Space II: Forsaken World

    Post  Scott Chain on Sat Apr 17, 2010 7:24 am

    "Probably a good..."

    Something stired in the Force as Scott rounded to face the shuttle.

    "I think it's a little late for that. Everyone move! Get everyone out of the shuttle, now!" Scott moved quickly. He reached out in the Force and began pulling the inhabitants out one by one. They flew from the shuttle into the open snow. Scott was just about to pull the last unconcious trooper from the shuttle, but it was too late.

    Damn...

    The shuttle buckled and Scott slipped and backflipped off the vehicle. From the ground Scott watched as the shuttle shot into the air between the massive jaws of a worm like creature. The creature was huge. It was as if a building had sprouted out of the ground. Scott felt another danger twinge in the Force. He looked for the commando that ran the scans.

    "Soldier! What way to the base."

    "That way, sir" The commando pointed with two fingers towards the mountains.

    "Good, run!" As Scott exclaimed smaller creatures began to sprout out of the snow around the base of the worm. They looked like giant fleas. Scott called upon the Force to lift the two remaining unconcious bodies of Levlin and a commando. He bagan to run keeping the bodies hovered near him. The giant worm, behind, crashed back into the ground shaking it.


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