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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Sun May 30, 2010 11:23 pm

First post!



Hi there,
I'm Mon Pandamari, Official Troll, esquire.
Nice to see you, great application by the way.
Feel free to post while our administration gets to your application.
The more you post, the faster our admins will be able to accept.
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Sun May 30, 2010 11:32 pm

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Mon Pandamari wrote:
First post!



Hi there,
I'm Mon Pandamari, Official Troll, esquire.
Nice to see you, great application by the way.
Feel free to post while our administration gets to your application.
The more you post, the faster our admins will be able to accept.
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Greetings. I indeed love trolling as much as you do, it seems; I've been called an "amorphous, shifting miasma of troll" --- troll incarnate. I hope I make the cut; I've gotten my hopes up already.

Now that I got the obligatory nice thing out of the way...still leaves a bad taste in my mouth every time. Razz Wink

Miasma?
That made me giggle like a manly school girl, you should be quite proud of yourself.

I've been needing another troll...
The artist formerly known as Tureil retired a while ago.
So I've been quite lonely, and Jagger's mom isn't as great as she used to be.
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Sun May 30, 2010 11:42 pm

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old age
Understatement....
I'll be quiet now. Embarassed
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Sun May 30, 2010 11:56 pm

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Down, Panda. Wink

Hello hello. I'm Vigo Surai, but you can call me Tureil or Turry outside of RP.

I must say I'm pretty impressed with your application! Very thorough, yes indeed.

Feel free to post around and get to know us, as what Panda said is true: The more you post, the quicker Tellen and Sergei can judge your application.

I do have to hope you're not as...energetic as Panda when it comes to posting however...It's hard enough to keep up with him alone in my "old age" of posting prowess.

Welcome to the Society.

I'm not a serious over-poster; at least, I'm not zealous about it. I doubt you have anything to worry about.

I simply post alot because I wanna beat Tellen in post count, and when I do, you can bet that I'm gonna rub it in.


Well, I'll be gone for a bit guys, me and Mr. Puddy wanna watch a scary movie.
(Oh, I totally went there.)
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Mon May 31, 2010 12:50 am

Thanks for the application. Feel free to post around the forums, and you'll receive a response in a few days. The more you post the faster the review process will go.

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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Mon May 31, 2010 8:37 am

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In-Character Information

Character Name:

Az'jari Tal

Character picture:

http://evil-wizards.org/swtor-wiki/index.php/Az%27jari_Tal#Starship
The above link leads to my character's SWTOR-RP Wiki page.

Age:

29 years; 29 BTC - 3682 BBY

General Appearance:

Az'jari is a Twi'lek with forest green skin and midnight green eyes. She is elegant and lithe, but also moves with a weight and significance that tells of an intricate understanding of the constant internal struggle between light and dark. Az'jari most often adorns unassuming attire, but wears a Jedi's robe while on Republic business, despite her distance from said Order. When not on assignment, she wears casual clothing. She also bears two tattooes; her eyebrows, which are beautifully drawn on, and an intricate design on her lower back that serves as a physical representation that expresses an innermost emotion, rather than as a representation of something physical. Her posture is relaxed and laid back; a consequence of her lack of discipline in recent years.

Biography:

Below is a brief overview of her wiki page's "History" section:

Az'jari was born in 29 BTC, on the temperate Core world known as Bellassa. There she was raised by her single mother, until being inducted to the Jedi Order at 13 by a Jedi diplomat she encountered on Bellassa; slightly older than preferable. She was taken to the Jedi Praxeum on H'ratth, and trained under two masters; first, the Mirialan, Madri Viss, and later the Kel Dor Jedi Master, Khar Vozan, after Viss was called away to fight in the Great Galactic War. Following Vozan's eventual fall to the Dark side, Az'jari Tal and several other of the former Jedi's padawans, accompanied by a single Jedi Knight, began a hunt for the rogue Jedi. She and the Jedi Knight, after losing all of their other companions, eventually confronted Vozan and his new apprentice, the Kaleesh, Nar'lion, on Yavin 4. Az'jari eventually incapacitated Nar'lion, and proceeded to kill her master.

Approximately a year after being Knighted for her actions on Yavin 4, she made a stop-over on the near-enslaved world of Onadax. During her stay, the oppressed worker class staged a massive revolt against the business giants and corrupt officials present on the planet, and Az'jari was swept up in the rebellion, hoping to find passage off-world. Eventually, she and the rebels discovered an Empirial presence on the world and routed it, allowing the revolt's leaders to take control of Onadax. Because of her assistance in the people's effort, she befriended rebellion-leaders Marron Shall and Orius Soth, and convinced the newly independant world to join the Republic. She also took possession of her life-long friend, utility droid T3-L7

In 8 BTC, she was shot down and crash-landed on the frigid world of Anteevy, following working for Marron Shall, looking into organized crime in the mid-rim. Against immense odds, she survived the elements with her droid companion. Eventually, and ironically, she came upon the base of the Anteevy Syndicate; one of the major crime rings she had been investigating just days before. After narrowly succeeding in an attempt to cripple the base from within, she led the Republic to the world, where several Hammerhead cruisers destroyed the pirate base and arrested all survivors. Az'jari was badly wounded in the process, and spent several weeks on the Ursa Major while recuperating; eventually, when the vessel reached Coruscant, she decided to join the Republic military and enlist on the Ursa Major.

During the year of 7 BTC, the Ursa Major came across a hidden Sith operation over the jungle-world of Derra IV. The cruiser was seriously crippled by the overwhelming numbers of the Sith forces, and she fled the vessel in an escape pod, crashing on the planet's surface with her team, Seventh Recon. She, and the notable squad member Ss'ar Lisk, spent their time planet-side in a desperate struggle to survive in the face of the Sith military juggernaut, an infamous Bounty Hunter, and a cunning Sith Lord. Eventually, the Ursa Major's distress signal reached the Republic, and the cruiser Tranquil Truth arrived on the scene, with a large escort. The Republic forces engaged the enemy in space, while one of many rescue teams, led my Az'jari's future lover, Grant Ilyaris, went planet-side. They eventually saved Az'jari and Ss'ar, ending the game of cat-and-mouse just in time. Grant received a transfer onto the sister ship of the one that destroyed over Derra IV, the Ursa Minor.

6 BTC; the Battle for the Drup System, one of Az'jari's greatest achievements. Her and her team played an integral role in one of the Republic's largest victories of the war. She led her cruiser in the space battle over Drup II, and then formed a cunning plan with fellow Jedi Onis Fee, and her one-time master, Madri Viss, to infiltrate the Sith lines on Drup III and destroy the shield generators protecting the Emperor's Fist, the massive space station in the Drup System. After narrowly succeeding, the team landed on the space station and sought to de-activate the shields protecting the orbital stabilizers. Az'jari, in the face of great adversity, succeeded, and narrowly escaped the station's destruction. Unfortunately, Madri Viss was killed by Az'jari's old nemesis, Nar'lion, in the attempt.

In 5 BTC, Az'jari once again went into service of her friend Marron Shall while on leave; Marron asked her to once again investigate a growing rate of crime on Onadax, stating that the destruction of the Anteevy Syndicate was only the tip of the iceberg. She also, much to her chagrin, reluctantly took on Madri Viss' former Padawan, Amilia Hall, as her own. The two, accompanied by T3-L7, travelled from world to world, across the galaxy, from Onadax to Faldos, eventually saving former crime-lord Jorr'gota the Hutt and instilling drastic change in one of the mid-rim's most powerful criminal organizations. After a startling realization regarding the source of Onadax's woes, and the increase in crime in the mid-ring, she raced back to Onadax to defend it from impending disaster, bringing the full arsenal of the Ursa Minor, and eventually Jorr'gota's pull in the crime world, to the fight.

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The above is a very brief overview of Az'jari's backstory, and is still a work in progress; you can check her RP-wiki page periodically for updates prior to the game's release.

Out-of-character information:

---She's of the Jedi Knight class, and she is my personal creation. She will be updated, and many dates may be retconned when the exact date of the game's start is revealed. Updating will continue until the game's release, at which point her backstory will be completed. Any pictures used are not my intellectual property, and serve only as rough ideas of my character's appearance.---

---Email is Myth-and-Might@hotmail.com---

Real Name: (Optional)

Will A. Cork

Real Age: (Specific Age optional)

September 22nd, 1985; 24 years of age

Location:

Toronto, Ontario Canada
Originally from Vancouver, B.C. Canada

General times of activity:

Four or five PM EST, until approximately midnight EST; times will vary to much greater amounts when work is not an issue.

Talents/strong points:

I'll merely say that I have many years of roleplaying experience; I was RPing on Warcraft 3 five or six years ago, and still am today, and had been roleplaying on World of Warcraft from the game's launch until only recently, when Ulduar was released in Wrath of the Lich King. I've been the leader of many communities, guilds and clans, and have an intricate understanding of guild structure, and have the utmost respect for guild policies and friendly members. I am dedicated to my RPing, and am generally quite active. For any specific inquiries into my roleplaying history or how my character came to be, feel free to email me, or ask me on the SWTOR forums, or even these forums, if my application is accepted.

Weak points

I'd say one of my weak points is definitely my procrastination. However, I'd say my most key weakness is that while I have a lot of respect for and will do anything I can to help those who are willing to make a true, concious effort to learn the art, I am slightly intolerant toward those who are ignorant and make no attempt to improve their ability, should it be insufficient. I do have high expectations from those I roleplay with, but like I said, showing a willingness to learn will take you a long way with me; a very, very long way. I'm a patient teacher for those with an actual desire to learn.

---

Thank you for reading my application. I sincerely hope that it is considered, and I would be very glad to be a part of what I foresee will be a strong, well-structured, friendly, and prominent guild in Star Wars: The Old Republic.

Az'jari Tal, Jedi Knight
Will A. Cork; May 30th, 2010

Excellent application Az'jari, very indepth. Also, your SW:TOR-Wiki page made a lightning bolt hit the tip of my penis from the sheer awesome and time, as well as effort, you put into it. I really need to rework my SW:TOR-Wiki page, and after seeing yours, I believe I have the motivation I needed to begin.

Galenth Dysley, self-proclaimed archivist of the Fillorean Society at your service. As others have said before, feel free to post around the forums and get a feel for the various personalitys the guild possesses. What a Face

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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Mon May 31, 2010 12:08 pm

Barth, Learn2Quote. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Mon May 31, 2010 12:17 pm

Aye... I'm Scott. Welcome to the Fillorean Society. I hope you enjoy it here and I look foward to RPing. I moderate/make stuff for the site. Like the others said (we all like to rub it in) the more you post the quicker leadership can accept you. C ya 'round. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Tue Jun 01, 2010 3:25 am

I love the detail applied to your biography. Having taken a look over your RP Wiki page I must congratulate you on how well it's done - most contributors to the wiki don't know their wikicode and they look unprofessional and bolted-on. Yours runs seamlessly together like a real Wookiepedia article. Well done. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Tue Jun 01, 2010 5:20 pm

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Tellen Silversun wrote:
I love the detail applied to your biography. Having taken a look over your RP Wiki page I must congratulate you on how well it's done - most contributors to the wiki don't know their wikicode and they look unprofessional and bolted-on. Yours runs seamlessly together like a real Wookiepedia article. Well done. Smile

Yeah. It took a long time for me to get used to the wikicode, but it ended up not being particularly difficult. And yes, I did put painful amounts of effort into making my wikia page coherent and smooth. After a while, it became pretty straight forward though.

I should ask you for some pointers sometime... I tried and failed epicaly at doing anything there. Of course I didn't exactly put all that much effort/time into it. Yours looks really good though. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Tue Jun 01, 2010 5:31 pm

Az'jari Tal wrote:
Tellen Silversun wrote:
I love the detail applied to your biography. Having taken a look over your RP Wiki page I must congratulate you on how well it's done - most contributors to the wiki don't know their wikicode and they look unprofessional and bolted-on. Yours runs seamlessly together like a real Wookiepedia article. Well done. Smile

Yeah. It took a long time for me to get used to the wikicode, but it ended up not being particularly difficult. And yes, I did put painful amounts of effort into making my wikia page coherent and smooth. After a while, it became pretty straight forward though.

Once you get used to it it's a fairly good language to use. I used to offer my skills to other guildmates who needed bios back in another guild, and now offer them to anyone in this guild who needs a SWTOR RP wiki biography.

Sure Scott, I'll help you out. Wink

In other news, the Leadership has decided to accept your application! Congratulations and welcome to the Fillorean Society.
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Tue Jun 01, 2010 5:36 pm

Congrats man! I'll ask someone bout wiki later... got other stuff to do at the moment.

Let's see... I need to make you a sig now. What a Face

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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Tue Jun 01, 2010 7:11 pm

Now there is just the issue of your contract.
You must give your first born son to Sergei for use in his sweat shop for the arrangement to be complete.
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Tue Jun 01, 2010 9:20 pm

Jagger Cyde at your service, the guilds pimp... Fine, I wish, but I am the ambassador
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Wed Jun 02, 2010 4:05 am

Mon Pandamari wrote:
Now there is just the issue of your contract.
You must give your first born son to Sergei for use in his sweat shop for the arrangement to be complete.

Mostly they're used for transwarp zebra handling.

There he goes -----> Arrow
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Wed Jun 02, 2010 4:08 am

Tellen Silversun wrote:
Mon Pandamari wrote:
Now there is just the issue of your contract.
You must give your first born son to Sergei for use in his sweat shop for the arrangement to be complete.

Mostly they're used for transwarp zebra handling.

There he goes -----> Arrow
You mean that Scott gave Sergei a zebra and not me?!
This sucks.
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Wed Jun 02, 2010 4:15 am

No no, the zebra was ALWAYS there. It has existed before time itself.

And it keeps eating the brownies and making slanderous images of the prophet. Evil or Very Mad
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Wed Jun 02, 2010 4:18 am

Oh....
THAT zebra.
I'd rather not have that racist, alcoholic thing in my house.
I heard he pissed on the Ka'Ba.

We either need to eat it.....
Or Feed it to Turry....and then eat Turry.
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:32 am

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No no, the zebra was ALWAYS there. It has existed before time itself.

And it keeps eating the brownies and making slanderous images of the prophet. Evil or Very Mad

My special brownies! affraid

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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:34 am

Scott Chain wrote:
Tellen Silversun wrote:
No no, the zebra was ALWAYS there. It has existed before time itself.

And it keeps eating the brownies and making slanderous images of the prophet. Evil or Very Mad

My special brownies! affraid
Are you in love Scott?
I hope not....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Vyj1C8ogtE



I'm sorry, I can't resist. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:50 am

Mon Pandamari wrote:
Scott Chain wrote:
Tellen Silversun wrote:
No no, the zebra was ALWAYS there. It has existed before time itself.

And it keeps eating the brownies and making slanderous images of the prophet. Evil or Very Mad

My special brownies! affraid
Are you in love Scott?
I hope not....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Vyj1C8ogtE



I'm sorry, I can't resist. Razz

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oYVppDpn7Rk

luls pig

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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:57 am

Scott Chain wrote:
Mon Pandamari wrote:
Scott Chain wrote:
Tellen Silversun wrote:
No no, the zebra was ALWAYS there. It has existed before time itself.

And it keeps eating the brownies and making slanderous images of the prophet. Evil or Very Mad

My special brownies! affraid
Are you in love Scott?
I hope not....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Vyj1C8ogtE



I'm sorry, I can't resist. Razz

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oYVppDpn7Rk

luls pig
I got that one on a daily basis in the SWTOR forums.
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Wed Jun 02, 2010 6:00 am

Mon Pandamari wrote:
Scott Chain wrote:
Mon Pandamari wrote:
Scott Chain wrote:
Tellen Silversun wrote:
No no, the zebra was ALWAYS there. It has existed before time itself.

And it keeps eating the brownies and making slanderous images of the prophet. Evil or Very Mad

My special brownies! affraid
Are you in love Scott?
I hope not....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Vyj1C8ogtE



I'm sorry, I can't resist. Razz

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oYVppDpn7Rk

luls pig
I got that one on a daily basis in the SWTOR forums.

You think that's the first time I got that one? Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Wed Jun 02, 2010 6:31 am

No, because I linked it to you like a month ago. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Application: Az'jari Tal <<Rejected>>   Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:19 am

Mon Pandamari wrote:
No, because I linked it to you like a month ago. Razz

Suspect I be watchin u...

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